Hey Asma, this was such a heartfelt poem! I loved the imagery you used with the picture at the end! There were a lot of emotions piled into this one for me. I also loved when you insinuated the idea of illusion and a blur not being a blur but sometimes a magnifier. Incredible prose! Thank you so much for sharing this! Your newsletter is awesome by the way! Just subscribed! :)
Beautiful poem Allahummah barik. I'm lost for words!
Jazak'Allah khair! Glad you enjoyed it. May Allah bless you too Fahee <3
Love this so much 🫶🏾🫶🏾
Glad to hear that!
Jazak'Allah khair for reading, Sally! 🫶
This is beautiful
Thank you for reading, Minaz🌻
Hey Asma, this was such a heartfelt poem! I loved the imagery you used with the picture at the end! There were a lot of emotions piled into this one for me. I also loved when you insinuated the idea of illusion and a blur not being a blur but sometimes a magnifier. Incredible prose! Thank you so much for sharing this! Your newsletter is awesome by the way! Just subscribed! :)
Hi, Khadejah.
Thank you so much for your comment. It means a lot.
I'm glad you connected with the imagery and the message behind it.
If you have any thoughts or feedback in the future, I'd love to hear them!
Again thanks :))
Wow, thank you so much for this Asma! Love your work! Keep it up! :)
And in his presence,
I can weep,
An ocean or perhaps a sea,
So, I can finally become free.
This line 🥹❤️
Thank you for reading, Liya.<3
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MashaAllah, love the last stanza 🩷
Jazak'Allah khair! 💝
Lovely flow, interesting premise.
This is such a beautiful poem allahuma barik. I’m going to delude myself into thinking it was for me since it was posted on my birthday 🤭
Thank you for reading Hafsa!
Barak Allahu feek 💜