You've written a beautiful piece. Allahumma Barik!
This piece captures the delicate balance of memory beautifully. The line "memories slipping through our fingers like sand" evokes such a powerful image of how fleeting and fragile our hold on the past can be. The thought that "to forget is a blessing" is profound, offering a gentle reminder that letting go allows us to heal and move forward, even when the memories seem to be "the very breath we take."
Your words flow naturally, like the rhythm of memory itself—fragmented yet meaningful. The idea that "a gift of their imperfection" is what allows us to remember without being consumed is a lovely and touching insight. It’s a heartfelt reminder that memories, even in their imperfection, shape us while still giving us the space to live in the present. This reflection stays with the reader, both tender and thought-provoking.
such a beautiful poem, I just came across your page, this is so good 💜
Thank you for reading, I'm glad you enjoyed it.<3
Beautifully written
Thank you.
Allahummah barik. Your writing is beautiful
Aameen! May Allah bless you too.
Jazak'Allah khair <3
That’s such a beautiful reflection on this piece.
JazakAllahu Khair for sharing your thoughts! It means alot.
You've written a beautiful piece. Allahumma Barik!
This piece captures the delicate balance of memory beautifully. The line "memories slipping through our fingers like sand" evokes such a powerful image of how fleeting and fragile our hold on the past can be. The thought that "to forget is a blessing" is profound, offering a gentle reminder that letting go allows us to heal and move forward, even when the memories seem to be "the very breath we take."
Your words flow naturally, like the rhythm of memory itself—fragmented yet meaningful. The idea that "a gift of their imperfection" is what allows us to remember without being consumed is a lovely and touching insight. It’s a heartfelt reminder that memories, even in their imperfection, shape us while still giving us the space to live in the present. This reflection stays with the reader, both tender and thought-provoking.
With Regards and Respect!🎉
Ghufran